Thurs. [29 Nov. 1951]
Three phone-calls naught availing, herewith a brief reply to yours of the 26th.
I appreciate your remarks, which do not surprise me greatly. The ending gave me trouble and raised doubts of my own. I agree it needs more work though I am dubious about a 'recap.' What it needs is a stirring coda of some sort to bring the thing to a crashing finale. I am not so sure that the other parts are so bad as you suggest, though the 'omelette' is probably a bit overdone. I'll see what I can do.
yours of the 26th