May 23, 1947

Dear Ellen:

Would you substitute this page 16 for the same page in the Behind the Log ms? There are two or three slight alterations.

And on page 3 the fictitious name of the Commodore should be changed to Camperdown – now reading:

Rear-Admiral Sir Francis Horatio Trelawney-Camperdown.
The alteration is a little more euphonious. God, if I had a name like that I wouldn't marry the Princess Elizabeth – I'd turn her down flat.

Ned.