May 23, 1947
Would you substitute this page 16 for the same page in the Behind the Log ms? There are two or three slight alterations.
And on page 3 the fictitious name of the Commodore should be changed to Camperdown now reading:
Rear-Admiral Sir Francis Horatio Trelawney-Camperdown.The alteration is a little more euphonious. God, if I had a name like that I wouldn't marry the Princess Elizabeth I'd turn her down flat.