July 16, 1945

Dear Winnie:

There are just a few changes.

'Congeal' instead of the commoner 'refine'.
Line space. 'So short a time.'
',' after paratroopers' veins
and accent over e in Pathètiques.

I think it is grave è (as you have it) not acute é. Would you verify?

Yours Sincerely
E.J. Pratt

few changes
He is checking the galley-proofs of
They Are Returning.